Monday, July 9, 2007
okay so its monday and for my closest peeps,u noe why today is a great day for me..haha..oh yeah i finished 2 poems i wrote that hasn't been completed for a while.. finishing it was harder than starting it anyway..well just wanted to say untitled(ii) is a bit melodramatic but the love poem is more contemporary i guess..well hope u enjoy embracing it..haha embracing..cute.
i love you,truly
Do not doubt the fact that I love you
Though our time shared is getting thin.
I want you to know I am always thinking of you,
Always loving everything about you,within.
I promise to do the best that I can do
And I hope that you will understand
That my everything belongs to you:
My soul, my thoughts, my heart, my hand.
My love for you goes down and down
Beneath both life and death,
So deep it must remain when I
Have drawn my last faint breath.
untitled(ii)
the aspirations that we strive
lingers in the corners of us
the sensitivity of us,deprived
blunting our dubious lust
long lasting insatiable thirst
drowning me bit by bit
dissatisfaction glooming inside
wanting,waiting to burst
sudden felt of lost words
stumbles upon its tongue
gnawing doubts spreads inside
all the thoughts,clutters
the window mechanically opens
shedding light into the room
enlightning the path
while darkness weakens
frail frame of principle that we uphold
shaken by windy wind
abrupt change of mind that's untold
deepens into deadly sin
lingers in the corners of us
the sensitivity of us,deprived
blunting our dubious lust
long lasting insatiable thirst
drowning me bit by bit
dissatisfaction glooming inside
wanting,waiting to burst
sudden felt of lost words
stumbles upon its tongue
gnawing doubts spreads inside
all the thoughts,clutters
the window mechanically opens
shedding light into the room
enlightning the path
while darkness weakens
frail frame of principle that we uphold
shaken by windy wind
abrupt change of mind that's untold
deepens into deadly sin
Labels: poems
7:05 AM
okeh iv done crapping x)


